Quiz: You Be the Judge
QUESTION 6: Identify what, if anything, is wrong with the following paraphrase of this passage:
If the awakening of the vampire bat was alarming for campers, it was even more frightening for the animals that bats prey upon (Holt 54). Paraphrase: The awakening of the vampire bat scared the campers, but frightened the animals even more (Holt 54). a. "The awakening of the vampire bat" should be in quotes. b. The author's name is not cited. c. A parenthetical reference should not have been used. d. Nothing is wrong. e. It isn't alive.
If the awakening of the vampire bat was alarming for campers, it was even more frightening for the animals that bats prey upon (Holt 54).
Paraphrase:
The awakening of the vampire bat scared the campers, but frightened the animals even more (Holt 54). a. "The awakening of the vampire bat" should be in quotes. b. The author's name is not cited. c. A parenthetical reference should not have been used. d. Nothing is wrong. e. It isn't alive.
Identify what, if anything, is wrong with the following paraphrase of this passage:
When teaching world religions in the classroom, it is helpful to introduce artworks that are representative of each religion. This allows the teacher to address each religion on neutral ground, thus avoiding indoctrination (Orr 3). Paraphrase: According to Orr, teachers should use sacred cultural artifacts as a vehicle to teach world religions in our schools. Doing so will allow the teacher to present each religion objectively.
When teaching world religions in the classroom, it is helpful to introduce artworks that are representative of each religion. This allows the teacher to address each religion on neutral ground, thus avoiding indoctrination (Orr 3).
According to Orr, teachers should use sacred cultural artifacts as a vehicle to teach world religions in our schools. Doing so will allow the teacher to present each religion objectively.
a. "World religions" should be in quotes. b. The author's name is not cited. c. A proper reference is not included. d. Nothing is wrong. e. It's a translation into another language.
After the training, fourteen students were able to distinguish between bacterial and viral infections, while only two failed to do so. This result was an improvement upon prior experiments (Gray 52). Paraphrase: After the training, fourteen students could tell the difference between viral and bacterial infections, while only two could not. It hadn't always been so easy, as this result was better than previous experiments (Gray 52).
After the training, fourteen students were able to distinguish between bacterial and viral infections, while only two failed to do so. This result was an improvement upon prior experiments (Gray 52).
After the training, fourteen students could tell the difference between viral and bacterial infections, while only two could not. It hadn't always been so easy, as this result was better than previous experiments (Gray 52).
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